Note: It has a lotta gramatical error since i tried to make it as rhymic as possible , so plzzzz ignore ;)
Here it goes ( and stop laughing, it's a serious stuff ;) )

And when you talked to me it started drizzling.
It drizzled like season’s first rain,
I ran for shelter, am afraid to get drenched in pain.
But it feels so different when you are around,
My heart skips beat when I hear your sound.
The day we don’t meet,
Makes my day so incomplete.
And I dream what I would say when I’ll meet you again,
But I lose my memory when I meet your gaze.
Your eyes so clear, it seems so pure,
Is it in dream, Oh God m not sure.
The sound of your voice,
Leaves me with no choice,
Like a rhythm so divine, music so clear,
Chime in the wind,melody my heart wants to hear.
I want to hear what you never talk,
Your voice brings life, your silence haunts.
It feels so lovely, when you show you care
I feel so precious, I feel so rare
I want you to be near and forever
I wish this feeling should not disappear
Like dew on leaf that shine too much,
Appears like diamond and vanish when you touch.
I wish I could tell, how I feel for you,
A feeling so sacred, a feeling so true .
But m still waiting for that lovely shower,
And this time when it will rain,
I won’t look out for cover.
Let me get drenched in the rain this time,
Let me be yours forever, let you be mine.
I have no words dear....its truly truly... so into love. Every word is like drop of love and believe me anybody who'll read this would feel like getting drenched in it.
ReplyDeleteYour expression of every small thing....like autumn...spring...first drop of rain...heartbeat...music..rythm...TRULY love is all around us...we just don't notice it.
You are really rare ;) and precious in a special way
So Keep it up...great start!!!
Love u dear ;)
Amazing stuff day after day..i didn,t know that such a sweet poet was hiding inside you....
ReplyDeletea very romantic poem.....:)
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